Love amended

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    Love amended

    in my dreams i see your face,
    in my heart no one can replace,
    the ways i feel,
    you seem so real,
    to touch your skin,
    embrace your body to mine,
    is where we shall begin,
    you are brighter than the sun can shine,
    with lips of tenderness,
    i shall confess,
    my love for you is just a mess,
    without you here its hard to cope,
    but there is that burning desire to have hope,
    that the days will fly,
    fly us by,
    without those tender words you say,
    seems like a year in only a day,
    with my sorrows in one hand,
    and regrets in the other,
    leaves only my heart can you understand,
    there cant be another,
    to kiss my lips and touch my face,
    with your hands you can take me to another place,
    with my final breath can you not see,
    what your love has done to me,
    im walking blindly down this broken road,
    where ill end up no one knows,
    if i shall end this journey and fall into you,
    than that is what im meant to do,
    but to keep walking by and without a glance,
    would not be giving love that single chance,
    my heart has been torn and beaten down,
    and here im walking to pick up the pieces the are scattered around,
    my eyes are wet but you wipe them dry,
    and help me find reasons not to cry,
    with a kiss that melts my heart back together,
    the look in your eyes says we are forever,
    with that i pick up my pieces and head for the road,
    where that is i do not know,
    why i cannot figure out where i should be,
    in the arms of my lover,
    yes we will see,
    for there is not another,
    that i call mine,
    today lets shine,
    we will show these people that its meant to be,
    forever i am yours just you wait and see...

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    FLAWLES commented on Love amended

    06-12-2009

    It seems in this writing, you have begun to heal; but be careful, don't let your guard down. Make sure this not another, on a mission to steal.

    lonewolf commented on Love amended

    04-21-2009

    wonderful emotions expressed here. i feel your heart ache

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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