LOVE AND MY INTERPRETATION OF IT!

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  • EG3RED
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LOVE AND MY INTERPRETATION OF IT!

TODAY I SIT HERE STILL BELIEVING LOVE IS A JUST A BIG GAME.

ALTHOUGH GOOD FEELINGS AND THOUGHTS COME WITH IT.

IS ALWAYS THE PAIN THAT OVERWHELMS EVERYTHING YOU BELIEVE IN.

BUT ALTHOUGH YOU TRY TO STAY POSITIVE AND TRY TO MAKE THINGS BETTER.

YOU ALWAYS COME TO THAT CONCLUSION WHY DOES LOVE HAVE TO HURT.

LOVE HURTS BECAUSE YOU GIVE YOUR ALL TO SOMEONE WHO IS NOT READY.

READY TO VALUE YOU FOR YOU AND NOT FOR WHAT THEY FEEL YOU SHOULD BE.

PEOPLE ARE SO SELFISH......

SELFISH BECAUSE THEY ARE ONLY INTERESTED IN SATISFYING THEIR OWN GRATITUDE.

THEY DON'T EVER THINK ABOUT WHAT THE NEXT PERSON MIGHT BE FEELING.

AS LONG AS THEY ARE OK WITH THEMSELVES THAT'S ALL THAT REALLY MATTERS.

THEY NEVER LOOK DEEPER TO SEE IF THE PERSON YOU SO CALLED LOVE IS FEELING THE SAME.

THIS IS WHY I SAY YOU SHOULD KEEP YOUR FEELINGS IN A SAFE PLACE SO THEY WON'T GET HURT.

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cmlestrade commented on LOVE AND MY INTERPRETATION OF IT!

03-05-2010

I Do like this very much though I disagree with your philosophy. If we loved purely we would never care if the feeling was returned. We humans are a selfish species so when we love the need part in us wants those feelings reciprocated. Think about the so called love we feel for celebrities and our other idols. We want nothing in return. Would you be crushed if your favorite star who doesn't even know you're alive didn't return your feelings? Of course not. Do we get mad when babies don't love us back? Very rarely. It is only our human need to have our feelings compensated that our love sours. therefore it is romantic love that is the great villain. This is a very incitefil piece

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EG3RED’s Poems (11)

Title Comments
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A BEAUTIFUL NEW BEGINNING WITH YOU! 1
WHY YOU'RE SO SPECIAL 1
LOST 2
THE WAY LOVE MAKE'S LIFE SO MISERABLE 3
LOVE AND MY INTERPRETATIO
N OF IT!
1
LOVE IS FOR FOOLS AND I AIN'T NO FOOL! 3
I LOVE THE FACT. 4
JUST SOMETHING I HAD TO GET OUT. 3
THE FUNNY THING ABOUT LOVE 3
I TOLD YOU I LOVE YOU 1
THE FORCE OF LOVE BEHOLDS THE TRUTH 6