Love exists

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Love

    Poem Commentary

    How I think love should exists

    Love exists

    Present time,behind. Mistakes afford us the opportunity to learn without shame, exulted by the fact that wisdom will come from the chance to learn about ourselves. Nothing prepares you for tribulation; it is those who conquer that stand by themselves knowing they haven’t broken yet.

               
    Affection was as simple as a kiss; nothing was involved except to hearts undefiled by the pressures of the world.  Nothing changes that emotion except broken promises, missed time together, problems that cannot be changed but are still focused on. Eventually the world you live in has to cease to exist and each person has to create a world they can fall into even if only for a few hours each day.

               
     
    unrestrained fear of failing you and the children you blessed me with. Fear allows me to have no barriers nothing is unbearable no place in my life is looked upon with disdain if everyone is free from worry.

               
    . Intoxicated by who you are what you have become and what I can look forward too. I sleep with your pillow when you are away to have your scent with me all day, breathing in your love. I pray that your beauty doesn’t fade, I lose forever if I don’t have my paradise with me.

     

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    danmartyjake1 commented on Love exists

    09-02-2009

    I have gone back to older poems and rewritten them, finding a better rhythm and some time a better word, etc. Hope you understand what I mean.I mean it in a very positive way. I really like your words and you have talent in expression that I relate to.

    danmartyjake1 commented on Love exists

    09-02-2009

    I feel all of your words....Somehow I believe that this could be honed into an improved form.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    casher6’s Poems (10)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    What should I do 2
    We can't Forget 1
    Love exists 2
    We can't forget about forever 3
    Love exists 1
    My song for you 3
    Starting over 0
    My questions 1
    Love your tears away 1
    Bright eyes 1