Love Fate Could Not Break

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  • ApaqRasgirl
  • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

Love Fate Could Not Break

Tough
Live without your touch
Ecstasy of love living without too much
Look out this life of mine to hard to bare

Wait...
Your love has marked my fate...
Life without you, words cannot  relate...
Come take my soul with you, lest it escape...

Life...
My life, existence, now my only device...
I ain't gonna live forever haunting memories at night...
I just wanna feel you, my life, to live, to feel that touch of delight...

Chains...
These chains you placed on my heart without blame...
Black are my thoughts, that loaded the gun, with no disdain...
Days of gloom, sets my doom,  just stop all the rain, take away my pain...

Love...
Is it so, existence of soulmates true love, felt above,...
Through space and time, my mind refuses to disclaim our covenant...
Held in my heart our all my dreams, memories each moment of your love...

Someday...
Someday, somehow, I will make it alright, just not this way...
When the everafter comes to claim whats left of my soul that didn't forsake a day...
Our love will collide in a swirl of delight in loves magical space again, without hesitate...

Written by
Asha
2010
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I don't know if this is a poetry style or not, it just came to me to lay it out this way, enjoy dear friends.

love asha

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ginga commented on Love Fate Could Not Break

07-22-2010

Asha, I really like this style it gives quick snippets of what you want to convey instead of long rambling sentences, I much prefer this style. ginha

ApaqRasgirl

07/22/2010

thank you dear, that is my first attempt at writing one using this type of style. and I found that I really like it after doing one, so don't be surprised when you see me come out with more like this. I am glad you liked it. blessings and a beautiful day my friend love asha

Charlie23 commented on Love Fate Could Not Break

07-21-2010

I enjoyed reading this poem, asha! I like the way, you have the first line of each stanza as just one word...

ApaqRasgirl

07/21/2010

thank you very much, that was my first time using this type of format. I am glad you liked it. blessings love asha

devaamido commented on Love Fate Could Not Break

07-21-2010

The poem illustrates the way the mind associates & gradually evolves its perspective of a personally catastrophic event. The casual format identifies the poet's point of resistance to fate's act enhances its effect on the feelings of both poet & readers.

ApaqRasgirl

07/21/2010

thank you so much for the grand comment. I am thrilled you liked it, thanks for reading my work love asha

frog commented on Love Fate Could Not Break

07-20-2010

This poem has a mystical feel to it. I especially liked the last line in the second paragraph.

ApaqRasgirl

07/20/2010

thank you very much for the compliment I am thrilled you liked it. thanks love asha

gogant commented on Love Fate Could Not Break

07-20-2010

Her lover gone, her life seems gone.....but, thoughts of waiting for the day she is called to join him, keeps her warm inside...knowing that she needs to bless what is here now, and let fate be the rule. This is simply superb, Asha.....................g

ApaqRasgirl

07/20/2010

thank you dear friend, I always look forward to your inspiring comments on my work, I am thrilled you liked it. blessings dear friend love asha

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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