Love Fish

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    The walk can be unpredictably stony at times. White clouds contrast with the bruised greyness of life. But it's all up there ... scribed by the same finger which carved stone words which waited there term to eventually become dissolved in rivers of living water.

    Love Fish

     Love Fish

    Love fish returned to the day of intent
    Will emerge from the shadow
    By the will to repent

    Mine is the sightline of diligent ways
    Being frought by dark power
    And God's hand through the haze

    A parallel of great and- the always beyond
    His minutes compound
    In a world full of song

    Eternal Springtime - redeemable falls
    I can savor the warmth
    In the house without walls

    Even clouds which are passing
    Are as white as the Lamb
    For they're filtered for profit by the Great "I AM"

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    Olan01 commented on Love Fish

    01-02-2011

    A lovely poem with pure sentiment that I enjoyed reading. Here written to enternal spring and living water a poem worthy reading. Love, peace and freedom, Olan.
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    Madelynn commented on Love Fish

    08-17-2010

    High five; 'Eternal Springtime - redeemable falls I can savor the warmth In the house without walls' love this! A great poem of faith, from a great poet- John E. I too love this part, as I love the entire piece. Love the strength, and the style in which you worded this.. so very you!! big sunshine smiles 2 you- Maddi
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    Marsink commented on Love Fish

    05-02-2010

    Excellent imagery with hypnotic meter and rhyme! a fitting tribute to our Great God and Savior!
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    WordSlinger commented on Love Fish

    04-25-2010

    Neville, I like this alot, great wisodom, and the warmth of love, have you been playing hooky, Teachers can't do that, ty WS
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    NevillePark

    05/19/2010

    yes... I think you're right on both counts. Now I gotta turn around and go up north again tomorrow.

    MrGee commented on Love Fish

    04-23-2010

    EXCELLENT! The rhymn and rhythmn are perfectly matched. The poem speaks of the Lord? Thanks for the read.
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    NevillePark

    04/25/2010

    Thank you my friend. And there are still mountains of works His servants can pen before it's a wrap.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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