Love Fish

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The walk can be unpredictably stony at times. White clouds contrast with the bruised greyness of life. But it's all up there ... scribed by the same finger which carved stone words which waited there term to eventually become dissolved in rivers of living water.

Love Fish

Love Fish

Love fish returned to the day of intent
Will emerge from the shadow
By the will to repent

Mine is the sightline of diligent ways
Being frought by dark power
And God's hand through the haze

A parallel of great and- the always beyond
His minutes compound
In a world full of song

Eternal Springtime - redeemable falls
I can savor the warmth
In the house without walls

Even clouds which are passing
Are as white as the Lamb
For they're filtered for profit by the Great "I AM"

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Olan01 commented on Love Fish

01-02-2011

A lovely poem with pure sentiment that I enjoyed reading. Here written to enternal spring and living water a poem worthy reading. Love, peace and freedom, Olan.

Madelynn commented on Love Fish

08-17-2010

High five; 'Eternal Springtime - redeemable falls I can savor the warmth In the house without walls' love this! A great poem of faith, from a great poet- John E. I too love this part, as I love the entire piece. Love the strength, and the style in which you worded this.. so very you!! big sunshine smiles 2 you- Maddi

Marsink commented on Love Fish

05-02-2010

Excellent imagery with hypnotic meter and rhyme! a fitting tribute to our Great God and Savior!

WordSlinger commented on Love Fish

04-25-2010

Neville, I like this alot, great wisodom, and the warmth of love, have you been playing hooky, Teachers can't do that, ty WS

NevillePark

05/19/2010

yes... I think you're right on both counts. Now I gotta turn around and go up north again tomorrow.

MrGee commented on Love Fish

04-23-2010

EXCELLENT! The rhymn and rhythmn are perfectly matched. The poem speaks of the Lord? Thanks for the read.

NevillePark

04/25/2010

Thank you my friend. And there are still mountains of works His servants can pen before it's a wrap.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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