LOVE FLOWER

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it is always hard to describe the feeling Love...words are not enough always....

LOVE FLOWER


Our Love like a flower
Bloom where it is planted
Like it's petals ,separated,
but united with a stem.
Like wise though we are two,
But united with love.
The color of the flower
 looks same as well forever. 
Like wise we are,
with the color of love.
The flower have 
its own fragrance
Like wise we have 
our own warmth.
Though the flower fades away
with it's short life span
Unlike it's beauty vanish
Without any trace 
Never will our love disappear,
From the face of earth,
As it's trace will be there
Forever and ever. 
 

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Stryx commented on LOVE FLOWER

06-29-2010

There is nothig more immortal than the love in our hearts.

Teardrops commented on LOVE FLOWER

05-31-2010

Well done my friend i see the love you have for your one and only loved the poem Marie

Hamnaz

06/01/2010

Thanks Marie... in fact I know it is not well written like many poems...but i don't know yesterday while seeing a flower i just scribbled what came to my mind....But I think your feedback gave it the title of a poem...thank u so much for appreciating me for my attempts,Marie.May God bless you and your love...

Teardrops

06/01/2010

You should always write what you feel . The talent you have makes it come together and its good my friend . My love pasted away 7 years thanks for the thought Marie

Hamnaz

06/02/2010

Thank u so much Marie..sometimes we will be blessed like this...like the love from a far away friend...your love is like a prayer and blessing to me...

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

Hamnaz’s Poems (15)

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LOVE FLOWER 2
Answer to My Silent Prayers. 4
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Yellow Roses 1
Rossy Rose 0
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Red Rose 0
O Violet 0
Critique the Critic. 1
THE POETIC LANGUAGE 1
DEATH 0
WORDS LIKE SWORDS 1
SOLITUDE 0
TRUST 0