love freestyle

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    love freestyle

    LOVE has many faces, but which one will it wear today?
    If I can't figure out it's features does it mean I don't deserve it, her?
    When you cherish something you have something to lose, so I wish for nothing
    The pleasure of simplicity, loneliness in it's abundance enveloping my all;
    Leaving me with not a care in the world
    If LOVE will mask it's face from me then it does not deserve my heart
    It's an ending to a race without even a start,
    It's odd so we’re even, I owe you nothing
    Since nothing is all I have to give I will willingly compart with
    I don't need to see your faces, truth is they no longer matter
    Nothing is my lifelong mate,
    I called, LOVE gave no answer
    Since nothing happened we are married now forever
    LOVE you had your chance but my soul doesn't yearn for you as before
    Nothing's in my heart now, then, and forever more.

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    Chaos128 commented on love freestyle

    07-28-2010

    You make the message plain, Cheos. Your words have genuine impact. "When you cherish something you have something to lose, so I wish for nothing" is a viewpoint MANY hold, but few are willing to admit. I hope you don't mind my saying so but it's a self defeating philosophy. It ain't about giving up wanting something, man, it's about not putting all your eggs in one basket, if you get my meaning. Sharp work, C!

    jmylez commented on love freestyle

    10-18-2009

    damnnn son this shit is deep,,but dont give up on love no matter how pointless it seems

    sincere commented on love freestyle

    08-27-2009

    Awesome! I feel you 100% considering I gave on love a long time ago. You should reall read some of my work. I think we have alot in common.

    cheohs

    09/06/2009

    Thank you sweety, I'm glad someone understands me. I've come to realize that Love is hard but don't give up on love. It's the people who are false representatives of it who you should disown. We do have a lot on common you have great poetry.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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