Love Honestly

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    • nini2323
    • I once knew everything, and now I know nothing.

    Love Honestly

    And now
    thinking of that place
    Where I once fed dreams
    where sky and water met
    A city where carnival meant
    hungry habits gorged on tourists
    where veins fed through liquid swords
    rose and fell in the streets
    where love laid dying
    crushed beneath the weight of 1,000
    broken hearts
    Misguided, misled,misunderstood,mistakes
    Passion forced from unwilling mouths
    enough that blue-blood runs red
    No one is safe
    Poets ramble to cement partners
    fed by psychics and small shiny trinkets
    And here in the carnival city
    I escape
    From humanity life and those who would,
    Love honestly

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    Rygar commented on Love Honestly

    10-05-2009

    fuck... this is brilliant nini! i love this " Poets ramble to cement partners" thats ... wow.

    mpssister commented on Love Honestly

    08-18-2009

    love your love honestly it very good i wrote too mpoems if you want to read them your friend theresa

    blanket commented on Love Honestly

    08-16-2009

    Oh what a wonderful carnival/life ride.....so fresh...not so much the images, but the way they are presented entices the reader so....only one tiny mistake that hurts it....layed is not a word....if you want it to be past tense it would be laid .....but here, I would suggest you drop the ed and just have 'where love lay dying. 'Sorry for the english lesson, I really can't help myself, but I really have to say this was in captivating write. Fantastic!

    nini2323

    08/16/2009

    lol done and done

    joewv commented on Love Honestly

    08-11-2009

    nice job i feel the emotion in this poem it is a very great poem

    wildpendigus commented on Love Honestly

    06-12-2009

    I like the Title of the poem as well as the poem itself, it sounds like a hit song and the lyrics are unique and different that's what you need to get a hit song good lyrics so different and unique from the others it could be a good rock song with the right production.Thanks for sharing it ! grecowong@yahoo.com

    nini2323

    06/12/2009

    wow thanks

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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