Love Hurts

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Odd, I’m in the best relationship of my life and my twisted little writers mind sludges through the muck of those suffering, broken and disgraced... may we never just lay there

Love Hurts

Excuse me but is that blood on your cuff

Did you wipe your mouth with your sleeve again

It must be from when you sunk your teeth into my heart

I hope that it doesn’t leave a stain

 

Never mind me, I'll just lay here and bleed 

   

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beautifuldeath commented on Love Hurts

02-01-2013

I fear as though with this write that you have so eloquently penned that you are the little fly on my wall watching my painful life unfold. Great write!

soulwriter

02/01/2013

How have you been my poetic friend - by your comments I would say growing... I know those periods and sometimes they are our greatest inspiration while being our grandest challenges. Hang in there and write to be free.

poett commented on Love Hurts

01-29-2013

Missing my fellow poet friends hope many come back including you

cheronld commented on Love Hurts

06-21-2011

Allrighty then.....this was short, sweet and very very to the point...Cher

soulwriter

06/23/2011

To the POINT is GOOOD... thank you I'm off to read you Soul

mufasa commented on Love Hurts

05-30-2011

Some days my life is like this poem ,some days not. Its how I respond that counts.Beautiful write.

soulwriter

06/17/2011

Yes, some days - sometimes.... thank you so much for smiling! Soul

frog commented on Love Hurts

05-28-2011

I REALLY liked this poem because it is simple and to the point. Perhaps the pain of the past helps all of us to really appreciate precious moments of the present.

soulwriter

06/17/2011

Your comments are appreciated in many ways - this was a passing thought of emotions that sting but certainly can be healed... Thx Soul

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Within This Well Worn Box 2
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Love Hurts 6
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Beautiful Stranger 19
Symbolic Differences 17
Drowning in a Sea of Me 18
Without Fail 16
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Pretty Bullets 32
Wishing Her Well 18
The Death of Life 22
Don’t Live Without Love 17
Never Ever After 14
Nature's Little Surprises 16
Love, Lust, and Lingering Sensations 13
My Haunting Heart 17
Weathering The Winds of Trust 12
Do That Again Please 21
Love's Coffin 48
It Hurts 31
In Every Living Space 14
UNITED TEARS OF SYMPATHY AND STRENGTH 21
Gargoyle (Girl) 27
Controlled 14
Your Love Is Poetry 25
BRIEF ENCOUNTERS 10
Why Not Spend A Fantasy On Me 13
Nothing Can Compare 8
Melancholy Cure 10
Our Daydream Dance 8
Vanishing 30
All That You Are 10
Words Worth 43
SEASHELL SOUL 17
Black 37
The Toy 23
The Rose Eternal 28
Whisper From Behind the Mirror 38
Stormy Purification 13
Love Stains 19
The Tree Within 19
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The Gallows of Destructive Love 10
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Crystal Iris 14
The Nature of Relationship 24