Love In Question

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  • CraigStyle
  • Enjoying my reality yet I'm still a dreamer

Love In Question

Something like a catch 22

I damn me if I don’t but you damn me if I do

It’s my fault we’re falling out of touch

Maybe I try to hard and care a little too much

I thought by now you would know me

I thought you would have learned

I do what I do when I do for you

And it’s always out of concern

But for some strange reason, reasons I can’t understand

You’d rather be away than right next to your man

You tell me I’m sensitive why because I’m your biggest fan

Or is it because I also feel with my heart and not just my hands

I don’t have a problem with you it’s a problem with us

Don’t want to dwell on the past but I love what it was

And what we were

That vision of love use to be clear and now it’s a blur

I worry about you sometimes when your doing fine on your own

My problem is I forget to just step back give you space and leave it alone.

I don’t know if it’s a man thing but I know it’s a me thing

It’s an everyday with you is where I want to be thing

But in the midst trying show you care and that you’ll always be there

How do you know your doing too much or taking it to far?

And when you realize it , do you stop being who you are?

I don't have all the answers just all the questions.

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pdizzle0420 commented on Love In Question

08-05-2010

first off...i loved this poem....been down this road so many times and can't figure out why it ends up all the same. you have a gift with words to describe your emotions and still capture the eye of the public. very nice write.

CraigStyle

09/23/2010

Thank you Pdizzle, I'm still awaiting the answers until then I have all the questions

Forevermylady93 commented on Love In Question

07-27-2010

I really hope that you have found someone that appreciates the man that you are. You are one of the few good ones. You touch people!! Your willingness to put your feeelings out there is very refreshing.Wish I knew the man that you have grown to be.

CraigStyle

07/27/2010

Thank you babygirl, Seems as though you've found someone congrats. Hopefully he realizes what he has I wouldn't want to have to make a trip.

GucciGurl commented on Love In Question

04-14-2010

AWWWWWW. That question is always so full of tricks. I am like you I have all the questions but not the answers. Not sure I will ever have them

jademelissa74 commented on Love In Question

08-12-2009

Vividly entertained, you manage to reach the readers. You crafted this piece very well Craig. You can never go wrong with your style. Great job!

litldeer commented on Love In Question

08-03-2009

This is a beautiful poem. I feel your pain on this one. I love the way this poem flowed and the rhyming was tight. You have a true talent for writing. Great job. A perfect ten.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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