Love is Grand

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Love is Grand

Love is just so grand
walking and holding hands
stealing that first kiss
the majic and oh the bliss

many times spent passing notes
showing how our love floats
a hug and a long and sweet caress
without it oh what a mess

We finish each others thoughts
no inner turmoil have we fought
our love is oh so sweet
and having fun under the sheets

to lay there in your lovely arms
falling prey to all your charms
I know our love will forver last
Bacuase we won't have had an ugly past

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Teardrops commented on Love is Grand

06-23-2011

this is love not the things with gold flowing and diamonds every where its being alone and in love with your mate . Great write Marie

rainbowfanatic commented on Love is Grand

06-21-2011

i like how this poem have the tone of what i would call a "happy" love. the rhyme scheme helps the poems tone seem more positive and the metaphors are nicely chosen. good poem : ]

animal

06/23/2011

With happy love you get eggroll,lol,

animal

06/24/2011

Thank you for the comment, you understand the writing and took the time to let me know, again thanks.

rainbowfanatic

06/24/2011

Well duh. Happy love = yummy yummy eggroll.

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