Love Is Just Not A Dream

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Love Is Just Not A Dream

   Often in this world, we believe that love change all dreams. But when dreams, are not what we think will change our future. Perhaps, in this promise we sometimes loss ourself. It come down to a world of problems. This may bring us a world of sadness. Which showed us more
then one side of our hearts. Never in this world, as this biggest love of
our life's. Come down to this passion, which may carrie us away in a deep, deep endless love. Sometimes, forget the trust in other people
we love. Which may sometimes, bring our dream of a real happiness.
Often this will stop us from getting married. As we pause our heart's from the joy of love. We never aspect  in our wildest dream, that love is just not more then words. But a furture of happiness, sadness, and dreams. In moment's of possibilities, which open doors to our heart's. In all my thoughts of real dreams , and a real future of a complete love.

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am2anangel commented on Love Is Just Not A Dream

12-11-2011

A few gramatical errors easily corrected. However a great and beautiful write and message. I am not criticizing your work as much as suggesting constructive criticism to make your work a stronger write to be fully appreciated. ( I tend to have errors in my work as well. well done. -Tonya

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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