love is stronger than death

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    love is stronger than death

    behold the dryness of the leaves flipping through each awesome piece of gravel below the knee.

    it goes beyond a knowing,an instinct direct from a nerve untapped and unresourced

    it appears shady and unrelentless and yet deeper than the grave can ever imagine

    it soothes the mind of the spirit and flows out of the flesh underneath the soul

    how else would a life-giving being drown in saturated salt far outpoured in measure to his defeated name

    blood stained it might not be,but gathered in liquid thicker than a sword can break through

    in battles unseen and yet won in conquering hearts eager to lift the victorious trophy

    it narrates the narrative of two souls begotten of fiery passion,overcome by limitless sensations

    a deepness beyond a knowing,intense ,strong,overpowering

    beyond the depth of time......

    beyond the depth of the grave.....

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    JoieDeVivre commented on love is stronger than death

    04-08-2009

    nice verses... free form yet each word used is full of spirit - all focused together towards achieving the right "tone" for the poem. thanks.

    babsie

    06/29/2009

    hmmmm interesting analysis

    babsie

    06/29/2009

    hmmmm interesting analysis

    babsie

    06/29/2009

    hmmmm interesting analysis

    babsie

    06/29/2009

    hmmmm interesting analysis

    babsie

    06/29/2009

    hmmmm interesting analysis

    VICKYSPOEMS commented on love is stronger than death

    01-09-2009

    You are a very passionate person.You have skills with words, that amazes me!

    HeavenlyAngel commented on love is stronger than death

    01-07-2009

    i concur... now only to find a love like that.

    Phoenix9 commented on love is stronger than death

    01-06-2009

    very well written

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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