LOVE KILLS

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LOVE KILLS

LOVE IS LIKE A SILENT KILLER

 

MANY TIMES IT WILL MAKE YOU FEEL A LITTLE BITTER.

 

IT HURTS SO BAD BECAUSE YOU START TO FEEL AS IF YOU’RE IN IT ALL ALONE

 

AND WITHOUT ANY NOTICE YOUR SPOUSE WILL PACK UP AND BE GONE.

 

WHEN YOU FIND OUT YOU START TO FEEL LIKE YOU CANT BREATH.

 

THEN YOU GET CONFUSED AND CAN’T SPEAK

 

AND MAKE YOURSELF SICK BY CRYING YOUR EYES OUT MAKING YOUR BODY WEAK.

 

MANY PEOPLE KILL THEMSELVES OVER AND FOR LOVE

 

BUT WHAT THEY FAIL TO UNDERSTAND IS THAT LOVE WANT KILL ITSELF FOR YOU

 

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Stryx commented on LOVE KILLS

10-11-2009

I think this is not so much poetry as rap. That last line is a killer - "But what they fail to understand is that love want kill itself for you." The word is [probably] won't. I've said it before - SLOW DOWN...

MIKE3447 commented on LOVE KILLS

10-04-2009

LOVE REALLY DOES HURT AND CAN KILL YOU IN THE LONG RUN. THIS IS A VERY GOOD MESSAGE.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

almonord1990’s Poems (28)

Title Comments
Title Comments
In the mist of my eyes 2
3 Times her size 5
Feeling the sheets 3
Meeting a girl’s father 2
I am so in love with you 1
Drifting 1
Don't forget about the love 2
Preparing me 1
Our hearts beat as one 1
I wear the pants in this relationship 2
I can feel it in the wind. 3
You are the maker of who I am 3
I have to be real 1
I will 2
CHANGING MY LIFE 4
Mother Set Me Free 3
HIGHER 4
SHINE 6
STEP BY STEP 2
LOVE KILLS 2
Father and son 2
Tragedy 4
your past 3
the fight 3
Did you ever dream? 5
Using You 7
The Strangest Feelings 6
My Type Of Women 7