Love, Leave me alone


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    I guess I get to bare my 'love unrequited' soul to you all. Here's tonights thoughts about that.

    Love, Leave me alone


    Leave me alone, I plead.

                I am consumed by your fire.

    You cause my open heart to bleed


    I am already scarred beyond belief

                Don’t you know that by now?

    There will be nor can ever there be relief

                From knowing love’s sorrows


    I’ve loved enough for a lifetime

                Of misery that it brings

    I plead now for my senses

                Enough to guide my offspring


    Through their trials of love

                And the pain they must endure

    And to know that they must be sure

                There is guidance from above.


    1/16/2010 8:24 PM

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    dancinghawk commented on Love, Leave me alone


    awww, Darlin', a passionate plea, but you know in vain ... for love, truly, is the fire that animates us, the connection that binds us, the gift of this dimension that is unique and special to this time and this place ... may your love light attract love lights that are available, able, willing, and ready! and a beautiful write! much luv to you! -dh



    Thank you, dh. I will hold that thought close.

    Marsink commented on Love, Leave me alone


    I have played the fool too many times. Loves flow can be like a brook of water, that knows no interruption. Oh, that we could just use it at will and be more noble in our endeavors. A poigniant view of human loves shortcomings. well written!

    StandingBear commented on Love, Leave me alone


    Unrequited love is certainly important .. bringing forth many thoughts. May the light return if wished for .. and burn brighter than ever before.



    The love mobius reveals all sides at one time or another. Thank you for your kind wishes. :-)

    dahlusion commented on Love, Leave me alone


    ...and when love embraces us, everything, all senses, run together with out intermission. Beautiful!!



    Without mutual consent, it is a living hell. I wish I could choose, but the light has been denied. Thank you for keeping in touch.

    ayyan commented on Love, Leave me alone


    A very nice poem and the out come of it is touching my mind deep. Best wishes. -ayyan-



    Thank you for your thoughts. I am wishing you well also.



    Thank you madam for having made your comments on the poem and this give strength to poem writing further and further. With regards - ayyan -

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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