Love Make

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    Love Make
    I wanna make love with you..

    I want you to kiss me
    and hug me as if this will be the last..

    I want you to consume all the energy left in my barren being

    and leave me with nothing but my

    blood (thats rushing through the veins of the non mortals)

    Hold me like a fragile crystal..
    never let me go until the morning..
    then break me as hard as you could that i could hear nothing but the pounding of my soul..


    Stay with me until the end of hte moonlight
    and let the rays of tomorrow's sun burn me alive...

    leaving me but my bones..



    And I will follow you
    even
    to the furthest oasis of your own desert

    And I will make love with you again..

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    mamasan commented on Love Make

    11-15-2009

    Ah the words are many and the rhythmn is frenetic and all I would say to you........is leave some of it for yourself.
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