Love or Reality

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    Love or Reality

    My baby whispered the most meaningful words of

    discouragement to me today, how can I reply to those

    razor sharp words. It made me realize that the world

    was and still is changing. I wasn't. Survival of the

    strongest comes to my mind, cold as a winter's smile

    the look in her eyes became and my ever so beautiful

    mind got stock between her two eyes of illusion. Love

    is not a home full of the most beautiful things in

    life. It's the home no one want to live in, the one we

    could never imagine our selves living in like reality

    the person who look and sees more than face, more

    than the eyes, the person who sees so much for so

    little. the self pitying fool on the other side of

    the mirror, I live in reality. My special home of love

    five seconds after her eyes became alive and the

    words was "I said I LOVE YOU" and I look into her

    beautiful brown eyes and said I LOVE YOU TOO.


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    cheohs commented on Love or Reality

    07-08-2009

    I like reading your poetry cause you relate family. That poem is truth in every sense.

    photochick commented on Love or Reality

    06-30-2009

    Great poem so full of truth there is just a thin line between love in life and the hate in life love the flow got me yearning for more of your work so i am off to read more keep writing you have so much talent i look forward to seeing what else you have to say

    ladyd37 commented on Love or Reality

    05-18-2009

    i tryd 2 givit a but the computa wudn let me !! xcellent write!

    cynthiakehl commented on Love or Reality

    05-17-2009

    insightful & beautiful fine line between love & hate

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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