Love stew

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i decided to finally write a poem for my girlfriend =) i love you shelby "ninja smurf"!

Love stew

Shelby,
you love me,
and i love you,
so lets let all these feelings come together,
into a single pot to brew,
let the tears of the past,
Be the water,
and let them all boil away with the pain.
Let our quarks and imperfections,
be the broth,
for they are nessacary,
and will add flavor to our love,
helping us complete each other.
Let our feelings for each other,
be the ingredients,
for without them,
we would have nothing.
Let our desires,
be the extra seasoning,
for even though they help add flavor,
they are not nessacary as of now,
to make our love last,
though if saved for later,
will make the stew more perfect.
lets mix it all together,
with the spoon that is our emotions,
for they help mix all our feelings together.
and let it be served,
With the ladel that is our hearts,
for without them,
nothing would be shared between us.
Finally,
Let us serve it into the bowl,
which is our bodies,
for they are what receive and give it all.
so tell me, we have all the ingredients needed,
are you ready to make love stew,
and share it for all time?
i know i am
            Sincerely,
    a ninja who loves his smurf <3

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LadyLuck commented on Love stew

07-17-2011

You never cease to amaze me Ninja with your beautiful words of love ^^ They almost make me belive love is real and reachable good job hun

Shelbylolann commented on Love stew

07-16-2011

Baby, That was so cute! I will make anything with you! Stew; most definatly! lol The poetry aside from the awesome korniness and love was sooo good(: I love you so much!

Sx9 commented on Love stew

07-15-2011

yeah yeah love your spin on a long last delusion that even better after all these years,,how can she refuse shuch a spin such a creatiive inspired spell that make love seems so easy,yes indeed its better to drink love as a soup than to burn in infatuation,after all smurfs are little people they need there soup to grow,,

CDWillams commented on Love stew

07-15-2011

Awwwww. :3 Now that's cute. :) Indict me jealous mate.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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