Love Story (reprieve)

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    Not hard to figure out who this is for :) hope ya'll are enjoying my happy poems for a change :)

    Love Story (reprieve)

    Look down at my hand,
    Nestled sofly in yours.
    Not yet a year has passed,
    But our love ever pours.
    You started as my friend,
    Soon after, my confidant.
    Now it's about time,
    Love is what we want.
    Love is what we share,
    Love is what holds us.
    We're a super team!
    No one to stop us!
    It's hard to think,
    Less than 2 years ago,
    We were with other people.
    Talking was civil, nowhere to go.
    We had the same interests,
    Liked similiar qualities.
    We started to talk,
    Our talks more than pleasantries.
    You wrote her a song,
    But your eyes said it was for me.
    From that day forward,
    I didn't want you to leave.
    Now it's your arms,
    That keep me safe and warm.
    My dear friend,
    We can weather any storm.
    Look down at my hand,
    Nestled sofly in yours.
    Not yet a year has passed,
    But our love ever pours.

    You started as my friend,
    Soon after, my confidant.
    Now it's about time,
    Love is what we want.

    Love is what we share,
    Love is what holds us.
    We're a super team!
    No one to stop us!

    It's hard to think,
    Less than 2 years ago,
    We were with other people.
    Talking was civil, nowhere to go.

    We had the same interests,
    Liked similiar qualities.
    We started to talk,
    Our talks more than pleasantries.

    You wrote her a song,
    But your eyes said it was for me.
    From that day forward,
    I didn't want you to leave.

    Now it's your arms,
    That keep me safe and warm.
    My dear friend,
    We can weather any storm.

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    toredbloodink commented on Love Story (reprieve)

    04-13-2017

    Wow... What an amazing story... I saw a beautiful picture of two people holding hands and laughing and smiling.... Love and peace....

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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