Love that first night


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    Love that first night

    You are a breathe of fresh air in a tidal pool of sun
    Sweet scented warmth and grace the feeling of your love
    I can't stop thinking of the moment you came into my life
    Even while I loved you the moment I met you
    I am enamored by your truth

    Soft deep gentle face
    the one I dream of
    I long to rest my head upon your heart
    to swim in the waves of your breath
    can I lay upon your pillow tonight?

    I will wait for you in your dreams
    with arms wide open
    and when you come to me I will hold on so tight
    I remember those last moments we had together
    there are no words I can speak that could resemble my thoughts

    For in your presence I am as high as a cloud
    Please say to me that your are there inlaid in the silver
    Say to me you are there dancing to the beat of our hearts

    Sing out loud the words that drip like honey off your lips
    so that I may lie
    in the melody of you.

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    sunshine33710 commented on Love that first night


    That was very good, I like it. Sounds very romantic. Keep up the good work.



    thank you for the encouragement and ratings !! I appreciate it :)

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