love you suck,bite me

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    love you suck,bite me

     night bye night
    and day by day
    i wish you can wash this pain away

    every time
    i let you go
    i cry all night dont you know

    please dont leave me
    just not yet
    because your beautiful face
    i dont want to forget

    come back to me
    and turn around
    before the words that come out my mouth
    hits you and makes you fall and kiss the ground

    i dont want that to happen
    because i love you to much

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    girlygirl1234 commented on love you suck,bite me

    04-30-2010

    nice poem its. good i guess. good write buddy.............GG
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