love you threw the moon

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    • jenifer
    • alert but not enough sleep . hope my poems please thee.

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    the heart is ever fonder

    love you threw the moon

    The key to my heart is deep in you. Only u have figured out how to use it. One day u were walking by my side and u said u love me, and want to make me happy . Maybe someday somehow youll figure it out how to use the key to my heart.

    Baby I love u tomorrow, baby I love u yesterday and baby I love u today, and maybe ill love u for all time. Baby I love u as mine.

     

    Bread and butter and bacon you used to bring those home with you to me. Shadows we used to make love in them, and roses on my doorstep from you, happyness we had once upon a time when things were grand and you were mine, back when castles were many not few ,back when love was new, 

    back when loving with you was a favorite past time. Back before u had him, back when loveing was all u wanted to make u happy again, back when I was all u ever really needed cause im not enough to please u anymore. Cause now we live so far apart , and now u have 3 kids and a heavy heart and to you im just friend, but baby ur the only lady ive ever loved , ur the only woman ive wanted, the only heart as big as your that would have me and hold me to. The only dreams I have of women are about u , but now ur with him now I cant have u cept as a friend ive tried to talk u out of marrying him but I face it I cant have you. Well never love the way we used to again, I excepted that long ago but I still love you 

    and dont want to let u go. I love you enough to shout threw the moon the rings of saturn the storm of jupiter and the cold core of pluto and back here to me ,but it doesnt matter anymore cause I can never have you again, but baby I want you to know that I wish I could be more than your friend.

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    SuSpence commented on love you threw the moon

    06-04-2009

    Very beautiful and sad poem, it seems like the people and events in our life that hurt us to most always make for beautiful poetry. Keep up the great work!

    Paolo commented on love you threw the moon

    06-04-2009

    I really like how you brought something fresh in this poem. I must agree with lady that the format, as it is, complicates the reading of this work.

    ladydraeko commented on love you threw the moon

    06-04-2009

    Good writing, imagery is certainly there and lost love is hard to accept. Letting go is one of the hardest things to do. This poem feels like something that is deep inside of you. The only thing if any I would change is the format and take it out of paragraph form. Hugs

    jenifer

    11/03/2011

    as for the format i write the way it comes out in head , which is more jumbled than the poem looks .

    brandon commented on love you threw the moon

    06-04-2009

    sounds to me like you really love this person n you cant let them go trust mne if its meant to be it will find a way dont give up

    dewachen commented on love you threw the moon

    06-04-2009

    I really enjoyed your poem it is sad when those we love go their seperate way but that is the way things are always in the end. Well written

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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