Love your tears away

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    I love my family and this is what I tell them let me love the tears away

    Love your tears away

    You expected alot but were given a little

    love was your only request

    It was taken from you

    It was not given back

    You closed up

    Your tears became your wall

    Crying to many caused you to turn away from the pain

    You couldn't hear anyone calling your name

    asking for your love

     

    When I speak it has your tears in each word

    Realize I will take the pain for you

    once you stop crying

    ask me for help

    tell me you can't let go

    I will break you free

    I love you it is simple

    I will kiss you goodnight

    I will protect you

    I will savor each moment with

    you

    only if you stop crying

     

    Keep your wall up but eventually i will break it down

    I will still pray for you

    lord she asked for help

    I am here

    help her to stop crying

    she trust you lord

    help her to trust me

    then she can stop crying

     

    I pray each day

    until you stop crying

    I love you

    it is simple

    I won't leave so stop

    crying

    Let me love your tears away

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    rkb11395 commented on Love your tears away

    08-23-2009

    This did not grab my thoughts but it did express a very loving and patient person who loves another enough to help that person see the importance and security in love offered. As a short story, it would be good, as a poem I question.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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