LOVE

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    LOVE

                                LOVE


    EVERYONE IS LOOKING FOR LOVE
    A WONDERFUL GIFT THAT COMES FROM ABOVE
    A PASSION OF THE HEART
    YOU OFTEN CAN TELL YOU ARE IN LOVE FROM THE START
    AN EMOTION THAT LIFT YOU EVER SO HIGH
    EVEN SOMETIME IT MAKE YOU CRY
    I AM TALKING ABOUT TEARS OF JOY
    AND MAKE YOU SHOUT I AM IN LOVE OH BOY
    WHEN YOU LOVE SOMEONE AND THEY LOVE YOU
    AND YOU FEEL IT IN YOUR HEART YOUR LOVE IS TRUE
    IT REMINE YOU OF MAY FLOWERS
    IT MAKE YOU THINK OF YOUR PARTNER EACH HOUR
    YOU LOVE TO SEE THERE FACE
    NOTHING CAN TAKE THERE PLACE
    YOU ARE DAY DREAMING ALL THE TIME
    TO THINK THIS LOVE IS MINE


    WRITTEN CLIFTON DURANT

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    Sydney commented on LOVE

    02-21-2010

    this is a really sweet poem. this is a nice one too. i agree with dumplin here that it is true.
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    dumplin commented on LOVE

    10-19-2009

    Just a couple of misspellings, but this is a very sweet poem. It is true, too. All I can do is daydream when I'm in love. But of course, I'm a dreamer anyway, being a Piscean.
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    ccslim commented on LOVE

    09-21-2009

    Good touch on Love! Content brought forth good but I note the rhythm forced. Note the speed of line four lol gotta say it fast to stay in one breath. I feel there is unnecessary extra words in line eight. "And make you shout" - and shouting? I felt the desire to add a word in line ten " your love is true" to - Then your love is true? Don't know "Remine" lol i know i know! Line twelve catches my mind deleting "it make you think" to - and thinking. "There" vs their in line thirteen, and the second to last line is "you are"- the tense has been set, so I feel it unnecessary thus ending with "To think" to - Thinking.
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    koolkid commented on LOVE

    09-19-2009

    Daydreaming about "real love" waking up to be happy because u were not dreaming . Well done cliff.
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    scrye commented on LOVE

    08-19-2009

    Ah the feeling of love and wanting to shout it from the rooftops and feel it to the depths of ones soul. A beautiful poem proclaiming love. Wonderful in its art thank you for sharing this with me.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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