Love

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    • DarkChi
    • Come look at the scares smother the heart opening up no more

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    i wrote this when i found out how much i can love....

    Love

    most people say when they want
    to break it off is 'I need some space'
    or 'I don't love you anymore'
    now I've heard all of those little
    phrases and all of them
    to me mean absolutely dick!
    i do love you
    and i always will
    i have to for two reasons...
    you respected me as a person
    and you were also the first to
    make love to me
    now a days i see it for what it
    truly is... a quick way to relive
    stress, or get pleasure
    i don't want to love you
    but i do
    i want to move on
    but i can't
    every time i try i see you
    except now... i see a beautiful soul
    to beautiful for words and
    he sees me for who i am
    and he respects me for all of them
    my dear varagon, i do believe i
    may finally be able to move on
    but you must know
    I'll still hold you close
    to my precious heart

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    Mrpoetry commented on Love

    12-17-2009

    good poem now keep writing and let those words flow

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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