love

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Love
  • ,
  • Emotional

    love

    let our love so shine, 
    that it transcends beyond time
    let our minds be as one in synchrony, 
    like the notes of a symphony.
    let our hearts be forever connected,
    so that our love can be perfected.
    if loving you is wrong, then i have no problem in being defected.
    i would be a liar, if i was to say by your presence i'm not affected.
    you are my other half, my rib plucked out of me from creation,
    for you, what i feel, no words can describe the sensation.
    I can only express my feelings through my actions,
    and even then, what i do only shows a fraction,
    of how far i will go for your satisfaction.
    I love you unconditionally, and not because you do the same, 
    but because life without you would not be the same.

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    ationel commented on love

    11-16-2009

    Wow. trully a piece of your soul, i love the way your words roll of my tongue, they flow so well together.

    Lyrix

    12/24/2009

    thank you... it must be because i also write songs,so most of my poems have a rhythmic flow to it

    Kaleidoscope commented on love

    11-10-2009

    Ok Lyrix I found you! 21 years old huh? and this is how you feel about your significant other? I'm 44 yrs old and I can honestly say "you beat me when saying how you feel" your soulmate is just around the corner..thanx for sharing K

    Lyrix

    12/24/2009

    that is true but most of the time when i wite... i try to write and capture as much perspectives as possible,so its not just the way that I alone feel

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Lyrix’s Poems (4)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    FEAR 0
    love 2
    HEART, SOUL, AND MIND 5
    SUCCESS 3