Love

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    Love

    Love, Love is a feeling god gave us to feel for others.
    Love is painful, its like thousands of penny nails being stabbed into my heart.
    Not caring if it kills me.
    Love is soppose to be a good feeling.
    My question is how?
    When everyone I love turns on me.
    They leave me in the dark to fend for myself.
    Love is something I wish I never learned.
    It only causes me haert ack.
    Love has never made me happy or feel good about myself.

    by
    Rebecca

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    origionalmerlin commented on Love

    04-19-2009

    you are batting 10+ on all three of your postings.. the first line fits...http://www.originalpoetry.com/typo-blues.. if anyone comments about the typos let them read this(grinz)

    Phoenix9 commented on Love

    02-16-2009

    it's sad rebecca, but well done and touches the soul

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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