Love

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    Love

    We going to have a really good time just me and you alone,
    We going to see if we were meant for each other,
    I can be your ringman and you can be my ringwoman,
    So now we can just link together,
    So when trials and test come our way,
    We dont have to worry because we know we going to solve it,
    All these people that said we werent going to make it,
    Now we just proved em' wrong,
    Because it will be one year on march 19th,
    They feel stupid,
    Trying to ruin us but it made us stronger,
    Ya'll should feel ashamed,
    Trying to ruin the love we never felt before,
    Ya'll should just go to hell,
    Cause the day we break up hell will freeze over,
    Baby I need you right next to me right now,
    Because I cant live much longer with you in a different city,
    I always try to be positive and you know that,
    But this distance thing is killing me deeply,
    They whispering in my ear and in yours,
    All they want is for our hearts to be torn,
    Just like cheese when you put it in the chredder,
    We going to be torn and lost forever,
    So baby the next time I see you I'm goin to announce my love,
    Get on one knee and ask for your forever trust,
    Now that we're older I know this is not lust,
    Because I'm following my heart.

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    Tempy commented on Love

    04-26-2010

    Ya'll should feel ashamed, Trying to ruin the love we never felt before, Ya'll should just go to hell, Cause the day we break up hell will freeze over i loved these lines truly awesome lines

    cbp3216dawg

    04/26/2010

    thanks :D

    ladyd37 commented on Love

    03-07-2009

    dawg ur deep 4 a young man i can appreciate ur work keep it up much love 2 u

    uspslady commented on Love

    03-03-2009

    Very nice, dawg...it's always good to see young people indulging their talents, keep up the great writing!

    chadallac74 commented on Love

    03-03-2009

    wow!!! nice a 10 bro!!!

    keithrberryjr commented on Love

    03-02-2009

    great poem.keep up the good work

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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