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this poem is about the differences ive had with men in the past

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when everything fells wrong
when you feel tight
you cant feel the love
or see it in the eyes
thats when you know
they are a lover not a love

when they leave and the love is gone
when they are there its a visit
they are not there to stay
thats when you know
they are a lover not a love

when they stay and hold you
kiss your lips when you cry
hold your hand
and stays when you ask them to
your closest friend
thats when you know
they are a love not a lover



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Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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