Lovers' Duet

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    Lovers' Duet


    What began as an urge to satisfy
    something primal in me,
    became a desire to unite deeply
    with you.

    I rose in love to your touch.
    I lost myself in the fullness of your kiss,
    the silky glide of your arms,
    the strong harbor of your thighs,
    the heat of your body
    inside mine.

    I open to you
    as you opened to me,
    parting barriers unfelt until
    we pressed freely beyond their sphere.

    You moved with love,
    holding me firmly,
    giving me pleasure,
    carefully stroking me fuller, harder,
    more vulnerable.

    Beyond the rattle of the clock
    and the confines of the room.
    Beyond cumbersome egos
    and the constant pressure of earthly concerns.

    Into an ancient rhythmical dance,
    a duet of quickening passions,
    breathless friction,
    breathful sighs.
    Your joy beckoned mine,
    and mine yours.

    Steadily rocking,
    rolling through cannonball bursts
    and delicate pulsations.
    We came cheek to cheek,
    sharing a sweet throaty song
    of I LOVE YOUs.

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    angelchaser commented on Lovers' Duet

    09-16-2010

    I ummm.....am kinda speechless. Thank you for the visual, I had a VERY nice picture in my head as I read this. So erotic, so sexy, I'd love to be able to write like this, sj. Nicely done.^^

    HarverTomsson commented on Lovers' Duet

    01-26-2010

    Yeah, that phrase, "breathless friction" gets to the nub of it on the outside, while "I open to you," crafts a delightful double entendre. Does it get any better than this? HT

    jazzbury commented on Lovers' Duet

    12-29-2009

    Very Passionate, Beautiful expression. Kudos my dear

    chadallac74 commented on Lovers' Duet

    02-16-2009

    Now that's LOVE! Nice!!! :)

    butterfly62463 commented on Lovers' Duet

    02-14-2009

    When I read this one my ex. pop on my mind I know how you felt.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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    Lull 3
    Finally 22
    Locking Lips 20
    Untitled 2 5
    Untitled 1 7
    A "Once Had" 7
    The Greatest 6
    Lovers' Duet 16