Love's Bite

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    Love's Bite

    How many of us have felt love's bite,
    Felt alone night after night,
    Cried to the one who has left us behind,
    Repeatedly giving our love that is so blind,
    Reaching out to someone to cure the agonizing ache,
    No one being able to sooth our heart break,
    Emptiness filling our heart with black,
    Being full of rage and hurt wanting to go back,
    To a time when we were surrounded by love,
    Believing we could have everything we were day dreaming of,
    Only to be awaken to reality's cold fate,
    The one we love only feels hate.

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on Love's Bite

    10-08-2010

    Wow.... yes I can relate. You do a great job capturing the aspect of broken relationships and broken hearts. Very good.

    Sourbaby commented on Love's Bite

    10-06-2010

    it is bitter and cold,but can't hide feelings,they do need to come out,and what better what to get the point acrossed,sometimes you have to be a little and cold to make people realize and understand just how much they hurt you. and emotions do come in all varities.

    MindNumbing commented on Love's Bite

    09-30-2010

    This is bitter and cold, Broken... a great release of emotions that I'm sure a lot of people will relate to very well. Nicely done.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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    Final Words 11
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