Love's Coffin

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  • Love

    Love's Coffin

    Love’s Coffin

     

    From the blackness you appear

    Freely wielding pain and fear

    An evil angel fallen from grace

    Prey hypnotized by the beauty of your face

     

    Another shall find eternal death

    As your kiss seductively steals their breath

    Jagged teeth hidden by your smile

    Temptingly disguising your cutting guile 

     

    Midnight dance with the dead

    To lure me into a devilish bed

    As I swore my love my soul was lost

    Vainly unaware of the cost

     

    You captured me without a fight

    Now all that was will never be right

    I strain to reach you as you pass

    Imprisoned behind blood stained glass

     

    How did I end up in this coffin’s jar

    Wondering who I am and what you are

    I beg for my blessed release

    Knowing immortality brings no peace

     

    My life’s chamber drains of air

    Your laughter mocks me in despair

    Shriveling I disappear from the light

    An undying victim of the night

     

     

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    Rhymer commented on Love's Coffin

    10-20-2010

    A very vivid dark write, excellent rhyme and rhythm. An excellent read. 10 from me.
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    ApaqRasgirl commented on Love's Coffin

    10-15-2010

    wow, that was a superb write on the dark side. passion, yearning for him that night she cannot refuse..........wonderful read.....love asha
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    soulwriter

    10/20/2010

    Thank you - love can be dark ==== and some passion can be beautifully dangerous!

    raziel69 commented on Love's Coffin

    10-15-2010

    I love poems like this, have written a few myself. great job, loved the imagery as well. 10...Raz
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    knight4696 commented on Love's Coffin

    04-26-2010

    Soul ... Awesome evil little tale! I love this dark stuff! :) And you certainly convey it well! :) Great Wrtie my friend! :) Ken
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    soulwriter

    04/27/2010

    A bit wicked, but also spell binding - we must always beware of those sharpened fangs! Thanks I will be visiting your home page to be thrilled by your abilities to create.

    mindy9968 commented on Love's Coffin

    04-23-2010

    Holy crap...this is really, really good! Amazingly good.
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    soulwriter

    04/23/2010

    Don't know what to say to that comment - except that I am grateful and humbled.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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