Loves darkness

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Loves darkness

Clouds of smoke rise from the ash,
vapors of love cuts a long gash.
Across the midnight sky of black,
screams of hate flung at my back.

I don't know where this darkness leads.
just walking trying to be free.
Free from the darkness of my soul,
clawing at my heart, taking control.

Darkness rises like spirits of the damned,
cutting the air like a knife in hand.
unable to breathe this life of hate,
wishing the souls would decide my fate.

embrace the darkness like a glove,
slowly and violently we make love.
bending and shaking in the night,
holding the darkness with all my might.





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sk8erpoet commented on Loves darkness

06-01-2010

i love this....it is kinda depressing but in a happy way...great write....sk8

Sydney commented on Loves darkness

12-22-2009

woooow. this is... wow. very dark and very impressive.

redbloodink commented on Loves darkness

12-22-2009

great flow..... but where there is love(light) there is no darkness....... red

mistynites26 commented on Loves darkness

12-17-2009

"embrace the darkness like a glove, slowly and violently we make love. bending and shaking in the night, holding the darkness with all my might" I love this stanza!!!!! The whole poem is sweet daniel but this last stanza is erotic and wow gave me tingles!!!

loveswar09 commented on Loves darkness

12-17-2009

Woah!!! Nice!!! Is it wrong of me to think that this was beautiful? I mean since it is dark...... Oh well, that's just my opinion! =) Nice work buddy! *hugs*

loveswar09

12/17/2009

P.S. *favorites* =)

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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