Love's Plea...

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    Love's Plea...

     My dear lady why must I beg &
    plea to you?
    Do you honestly doubt that my
    love is true?
    I offer only the best within
    recieving of my heart,
    No way would I ever do anything
    to tear us apart,
    What other words must I say to
    you to prove of myself,
    I have already shown in my actions
    that my love is filled with wealth,
    I love you my lady please let me
    show you I am real,
    You must open your eyes & let me
    show you how I feel,
    Why else would I even go through
    so much to have your love,
    My vision of us together is vivid,
    sent from deep in the heavens above,
    I may be able to breath baby but I
    can't live departed from you,
    I'll never remain the same without
    you, my quest for love will truly be through.....

    By Michael Smith

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    BreeLove commented on Love's Plea...

    08-02-2012

    well said my friend. In time you will find that no matter how much we say "I LOVE YOU" , and no matter what we do, for some the hurt and pain of past loves will build a wall of doubt, its not anything you have done, its ghosts of hurt gone by.... but if this person can see thru that and see YOU for what you really are, you will share a love like no other, but if she cant see that, then its her loss, and at some point you have to let go....... Learn to love YOU first and formost, all the rest is just a bonus! but ur poem was very heart felt, i only hope she opens her eyes before it too late! love n blessings to you -Bree
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    Wakeitha commented on Love's Plea...

    06-04-2012

    Very beautiful words, felt like icing spread over cake. Keep written want to read more. God bless ur realationship, just be patient with her maybe she been hurt before. Write those beautiful poems to her and let her no she's your queen and everything.
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