Loves Steps

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Loves Steps

Step one is a single heart

With a want and desire,

Finding someone to love

Adore and admire.

Step two is the time

When two hearts unite,

For love and for honor

Your willing to fight.

Step three's the invasion

Which you cannot control,

And you prayed everlasting

From your heart and your soul.

Step four is the last step

When all your love's gone,

And you sit by the window

And your all alone.

So be careful of stop one

Step two's bound to fallow,

Step three and step four

Become hard pills to swallow.

Beware of the steps

In life that you take,

Make sure the decisions

Are the right one's you make.

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gregster commented on Loves Steps

08-27-2010

i say bad choices brings broken hearts and good ones brings joyful spirits ........great poem

Shadowwalker

09/13/2010

why ty kind sir and you are so right.

kdarcy commented on Loves Steps

07-20-2010

Simple truth, yet so hard to learn no matter the experience of your past or the hoped for future. Each is different for the giver and receiver, nice write, be well ... your advise is good

Shadowwalker

08/24/2010

Again ty so much for your words. I write from what I have lived and it's easier that way.

kdarcy

08/24/2010

Agreed, steps taken are easy to relate to, be well

Shadowwalker

08/24/2010

LOL so true and I will never forget those steps again. I promise you that.

Shalaya commented on Loves Steps

06-09-2009

Yea i agree with Gentle T. I really like this one though love is a tough subject..and there are so many different opinions on what it is and is true and how you know if its true..it confuses me sometimes..

Shadowwalker

06/19/2009

No One knows what love is... my opinion may not be that of another's. After all we are all human. This is just what I have learned about love.

GentleT commented on Loves Steps

06-01-2009

Very wise advise. I like how you used steps to make your point. I think we all desire to be loved but as your poem say's we have to keep our minds alive as well as our hearts.

Shadowwalker

10/11/2009

TY it was the best way to get point accross

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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