Loving You is the Greatest Pleaure I will Ever Know

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inspired and dedicated to my wife Dawn of 31 years

Loving You is the Greatest Pleaure I will Ever Know

loving you is the greatest pleasure I will ever know


you alway's allowed me
to be anything

you alway's told me
We could do everything

together

you were there when moma died
you held me tight
when I cried

you've read everything that I wrote
even the one's that put a lump
in your throat

I wanna tell you

that loving you

is the greatest pleasure
I will ever know

loving you
is like comfort food
a blessing to my soul

loving you is
the greatest pleasure
I will ever know

I want the whole world to know
that's why I write
and
put on a minstral show

that loving You

is the greatest pleasure
I will ever know


2010 HC Holbert

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SpiritSong commented on Loving You is the Greatest Pleaure I will Ever Know

04-18-2010

Thank You HC your loving thankful heart has blessed me in this gift to your beloved. Beautiful...it made brought tears to my eyes... a 10 and a fav.."Spiritsong"

WordSlinger commented on Loving You is the Greatest Pleaure I will Ever Know

02-22-2010

Great work, indeed, it is, sorry I haven't made it over to read sooner, ty WS

badwan commented on Loving You is the Greatest Pleaure I will Ever Know

02-22-2010

is the greatest pleasure I will ever know Yes dear, this is how true love touches our soules, and soften our hearts.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

HCHolbert’s Poems (187)

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Magical Moment a Christmas Suprise 1
Goal Post Prayer 0
When You See My Heart 1
Champions 0
Mend This Broken Heart of Mine 1
Through These Words 0
Show Your Love Today 1
In The Hands of Love 0
Now I See 0
Just As You Are 2
Hall of memories 0
When I am Gone 3
I Wanna Be Free 1
Mercy 0
Just Part Me Out 2
Corpus Christi by the Bay 2
The Suit of Forgiveness 2
Life for Life 0
Yellow Rose 2
Break the Chains 1
Bet I Get Some Sleep Tonight 0
Where Is The Love 0
Thank you Jesus 0
Medicated 1
Sunlight In Your Eyes 0
In A Little While 1
The Shape Of My Heart 1
According To The Plan 0
Choose Love 1
Dont You See 0
As Deep as the River Runs 1
Hole In The Ocean 2
Only Your Love 1
Tribulation 0
When Angels Cry 0
Old Blue Jean's 0
The Wedding Cake 0
Wings of an Angel 0
When A Man Cries 4
We Entertain Angels Unaware 1
Through It All 0
The Old Songman 0
Refiners Fire 0
You Touch My Soul 0
Cry Of The Fishermen 3
Cedars in Mist 1
Love Life and It Will Love You 2
The Star You Are 1
Searching For The Promised Land 1
He Taught Us 2
I Need You Now 3
Keep Turning The Pages 2
Loving You is the Greatest Pleaure I will Ever Know 3
Ties Between Us 0
Angel Fly 2
Gems 2
RElive The Moments 1
The Little Things 2
Learning to Fly 1
Breathless 0
Walk with Him 0
Nights of Lightning, Days of Thunder 2
Soul of a Man 3
Smiles that Hide the Pain 0
Shotgun Ally 1
Angel I Cling To 0
Being 2
God made Dad 1
Old Cross 1
Well Pleased 0
Breath of Life 0
Fallen Star 0
I See You There 0
the Spirit Within 0
Your All I am 0
Reunion 1
Blues Man 2
Pot of Life 1
the Whittler 1
Paths 0
Greatness 1
There is a Sleeping Lion in Every Barve Man 1
Take Me 1
The Vets 3
With All Your Heart Love 0
Standing At The Foot Of The Mountain 2
Dawns Mountain Lulaby 1
Touch Me Again 1
Morning on Nooksak 1
A Thanksgiving 0
Lengths 0
All Dead Fish Smell The Same 2
My Little Family 0
the Plague 1
Hands of Time 2
Peace in Moments,Life in Dreams 0
Unite 1
The Color of Dreams the Color of Wind 1
Time,Fire and Soul 0
Places Real and Imagined 0
Tales Told in Wood,Wind & steel 2
Woods and Water 1
Survive 0
Frozen Silence 1
It's Comming 0
Moments 2
The Puppet Master 1
The Product 0
Enchanted Circle 0
How High 1
No Stranger To The Pain 1
Grit 2
Still Holding Hands 2
Renewel 1
Sounds 3
Well Of Love 0
Love & Peace 0
The Homecoming 1
Reconcile 1
Freedom Train 0
Take Me Back 0
Closer To My Mountain Home 0
The Beat Of A Different Drum 0
Got To Get Away 1
Love Like This 0
When I Look At You 0
Thoughts Of You 0
Red Sands Of Time 0
The Journey 0
Call Of The Mountain 0
Star Shined 1
Aspen Embrace 0
God gave 3
Sacred Wind Mystic Rythms 0
Reaching Out 1
Distress Signals 1
The Soul Hunters 1
Your Story 0
Dont Let A Good Woman Down 1
Hands 1
Sacred Ground 1
I'll Be Home By Tonight 0
I'm going To Love You Anyway 0
The Artist 2
The Cow Hand 1
Simple Pleasures 1
Sea Of Tears 1
A Simple Kind Of Man 0
Encourage One Another 1
Closer To My Home 0
The Beggining or The End 1
Juke Box For The Lord 0
Harvest Time 0
Star Shined On My Path 1
Words 0
Take Me Back To The Mountains 0
When I Look At You 0
Hope In Us All 2
Is This How It Feels 1
Because Of You 0
Skippin Stone's 1
Voices and Vision 2
Grandmas Kitchen 4
Dad 0
Top Of The Mountian 1
Lines 0
The Children 2
A Single Rose 3
The Haunting Sound 1
The Fisherman 2
One More Mountain To Climb 1
Old Tree 1
Log Cabin Dream 2
Loving You 0
A Quiet Place 2
Pinecone 0
The Blue Gate 0
Dont Wake Me Up 1
Where Fire Meets Sky 1
Enchanted Forest 1
Touching Souls 1
On Bent Knee 0
Tear Drops On Ferns 4
No Promises 1
Tent City 4
Spirit Of The Falls 4
Condition Of The Heart 5