Loving You

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I personally love this poem ..it touches me in my heart it's pure and it can be mis-understood...

Loving You

I want to be loving you like no other
Who knows what's going to happen in the future
I don't care any more
I want 2 love you like no other

Not a red rose can compare to your sent
Not one song as sweet as a love song can compare to your voice
Not a poem can compare to the words that I want to tell you
Not a kodak picture or a perfect or painting can compare to your face

I want to be loving you like no other
I sit next to you in lonely sorrow
wanting you to be a little closer to me but I don't show it
my facial expressions are differnt from my body language and opposite from what I'm truely feeling
Being the love of your life is were I want to be

Loving You,

I want to be the one loving you, when your down and sad
I want to be the one kissing your sweet lovely cheeks when a tear drop falls from your eyes

I am the one you dream of each night
When will you let me in it's not the one you've been chatting with or texting :
I am the love of your life I am here in your heart Please let me love you...
I want to be loving you ...

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Savant commented on Loving You

01-25-2010

Sounds like a bit more than a crush. It has a hint of jealousy, a sprinkle of authenticity, with a dash of "may need a strait jacket". Very understandable piece. It reads like a personal account of an actual moment in your life. It would be really awesome if you wrote this purely from the imagination. I can dig it.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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