Loving You

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    Loving You

    You stole my heart only in seconds of time
    right in front of my own eyes
    i cant explain the way i now feel
    its so hard to believe, is it just a dream, or is it really real?
    i cant deal with the fact i may not be your only one
    but baby to me you are second to none
    my friends say im a fool, just a puppet on a string
    that i might be in love,but for you im just a fling
    i think there only jealous and just want you for there own
    i hope i have your heart one day, mine youve already stole!
    but yet your not a masked thief but a bandit in the night
    and everytime im sad i just think of you then im alright
    as this poem ends i have only one final thing to say
    i promise my love will grow for you each and every day

               K_P


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    Qualin commented on Loving You

    10-26-2012

    I new you cared but you didnt have to let everyone know exactly how you felt.....you secret admirer....well not very secret any more!! Good one gal!!

    killingP13

    10/30/2012

    your the best you always put a smile on my face miss you lots :D

    slimgoodwoody commented on Loving You

    01-10-2012

    Great poem, showing the conflict between reality and seeing through the rose colored glasses of love, where all flaws disappear! I enjoyed it!

    killingP13

    02/13/2012

    a bit late but thank you :)

    Viper89 commented on Loving You

    05-25-2011

    Girl, some advice if I may. Get away from this man today!!! This guy is trouble! I was thesame way, my friends were the same way and it turns out they we're right! Your friends can see more than you when you are blinded by "love"!!!

    killingP13

    07/20/2011

    thank you for the advice :) i see your going to be a great friend

    Qualin commented on Loving You

    05-19-2011

    NEVER NEVER PLAY SECOND FIDDLE...YOU ALREADY KNOW THE OUT COME...FAILURE ETC.,ETC.,AND SO ON...YOUR FRIEND QUALIN

    killingP13

    07/20/2011

    sorry i havent been on in such a long time :( things have come up thank you for your support :D miss you! im back

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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