Loving You

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    Loving You

    Laying there with my arms around you,
    loving you was all I could do.
    You are my life, my heart, my soul,
    without you I can never be whole.
    I tried to turn you away from me,
    but a life without you could never be.

    You brought light to my darkened life,
    though loving you cut like a knife.
    You saw past my cold reserve,
    giving me a love I didn't rightly deserve.
    Though I put you in harms way,
    "Never leave me" was all you could say.

    You wanted us to be forever,
    but doing that to you I could never.
    Though you felt your heart breaking,
    life from you I will not be taking.
    You became my only muse,
    and your love I would never abuse.

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    ElleMendiette commented on Loving You

    07-21-2009

    Personally, I believe that love poems are a bit cliche; however, I like your dark style mixed with the concept of love and what it ought to be.

    WordSlinger commented on Loving You

    03-14-2009

    Love is sneeky

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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