loving

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    loving

    why in bed do you want to share
    what is so perfect between us two
    how could you not even care
    about sharing what only we do

    is my love not strong enough to hold you
    to having only me in your heart
    is it too much to ask for just us two
    like it used to be in the start

    why does your thoughts turn to corruption
    when there is no one as perfect as you
    when im so full of sexual devotion
    cuz i love everything with me you do

    i wish we were more alike in bed
    cuz now i know were just too far apart
    ill always keep you inside my head
    cuz its you forever deep inside my heart

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    cagle64 commented on loving

    06-23-2009

    its so true some people are only free when they are intimate when the heat in passion
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    HarverTomsson commented on loving

    06-10-2009

    Your man's need for sexual adventure is his issue to discover how to manage, or he will have a string of disenchanted, broken-hearted, or bitter women trailing the dregs of his terpitude. I wish you a better man who will value you for the irreplacable partnership you are so willing to offer. Poetically, this informality works becuase of the conversational tone. Why are you letting this guy off so easy?
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    heartnsoul74

    06/10/2009

    hey thanks for the comments, it is refreshing that someone actually wants to read the things floating in my head and understanding some of it. I really havent let anyone off, but its for my inner healing. let the pain go and try to look more on the positive side. im better off!!! right? lol but he still everyday has a very mental abusive kind of way about him.. and i would rather find the strength to write and get away than to stay and deal with it. but thank you so much for the comments.. i just learned how to read them.. and i hope to hear from you soon!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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