Luke

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  • Loss
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  • Sadness
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  • Lost Love
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  • Life
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  • Emotional
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  • Confusion

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    I apologize for this but I can think of no other way to say how I feel.

    Luke

     Sinking feeling in my gut, I know the time is near but I wish not to face it.
    You say the words Ive known were coming and my legs weaken beneath me,a crushing sensation envelops me; I weep for what I can not change.
    The memory of how you touched me, how you breath my name of how I feel when I'm in your arms.
    Thoughts of you swirl through my mind, making the pain worsen.
    Insidious whispers feed fears of never finding what I seek, what I desire and what I need; fueling the suffering I must endure, though I wish it it not upon you.

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    freemansvoice commented on Luke

    08-25-2010

    stay near the salad bar. "It's not over till the fat lady sings'. Love is not wanting to hurt the one you love. You might want to kill them somes though. Put on your best mermaid outfit and sit by the sea. A sailor should come by any moment just to hear your song.
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    ansari commented on Luke

    07-11-2010

    parting is always painful when it is emotional. the more you think of you the more you become emotional. thank you. a 10 from me.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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