Lull

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  • Deception
    • sjlove
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    Lull

    I see you beside me

    and it's only a dream

    There you go elsewhere

    and now it's reality

     

    In my eyes I see only you

    Inside my soul

    Where'd you go

     

    Camouflaged in love

    Where do I stand

    Somewhere in an illusion

    I cannot mend

     

    There's a ticker that empowers me to exist

    Contiguous once

    and there; was a purpose

     

    Stumble and fall

    In disarray

    You left me there

    Still I'm waiting

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    GUSTY commented on Lull

    01-03-2011

    THIS IS A LOVELY WORK; I LOVE IT 'COS I SHARE THE PAINS! BEAUTIFUL!!!
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    angelchaser commented on Lull

    08-30-2010

    This is a beautiful poem, sj. One can feel so easily the pain of which you write. May you never know hurt like that again. *hugs*
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    Phoenix9 commented on Lull

    07-26-2009

    very deep and a great use of words that flow with a sadness you are feeling
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    sjlove

    07/26/2009

    thank you.. appreciate the comment.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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