Lust Test

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    Lust Test

    Temptation tries to pull my body away

    Make me a traitor to the way I feel

    Doubt and foolish notions try and tempt me to give up

    Deep thoughts asking me

    Is this what I really want

    Past the passion

    Through the infatuation

    At the end of the day one thought still remains

    I care for this woman

    What I feel for her is honest

    I couldn’t bear the notion of betraying her

    For my Heart is to connected

    To hers for that

    She is beautiful

    I have no need for another’s body

    Hers is perfect in my eyes

    I have no need to leave or give up

    What she gives in the Heart is priceless

    She is worth holding on to

    The simple fact is

    She’s connected to my Heart

    And not many can do that

    I’ve slept with beauty before

    But those had no connection

    I’ve talked with the kind without a single connection

    My point to be made is

    This

    This woman I’m sharing life with now

    She’s everything I want

    And I’m satisfied and then some

    With who she is in every way

    I need not do anything foolish

    To dare lose what I cherish so much

    -Fin-

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    Trista3 commented on Lust Test

    12-20-2013

    that is very beautiful. i liked reading it. almost like a love song.

    TheLastCowboy

    12/23/2013

    Thanks, I wrote this about a woman who wanted me to sleep with her, at the time I had a girlfriend so I said no, how I wanted to, but I cared too much for my gf. In the end the same gf I stayed loyal to and wrote this about was cheating on me the hole time...

    Trista3

    12/23/2013

    I really really dislike cheaters. especially women who don't stay true to their military man. that just pisses me off. they are out there risking their lives so you can be free and you want to let some other guy stick you cause your lonely? thats bullshit in my book. I was with my ex husband for 3 tours and when i got bored i read a book or made a care package for his whole squad. sorry that was long winded but i really dislike cheaters.

    poeticmike commented on Lust Test

    01-08-2013

    When you have come across the one you love, no other can spark your interest. In order to keep what we most cherish, we exclude any temptations for another, in fact, they never come to mind. Nice piece this is lovely.

    TheLastCowboy

    01/08/2013

    Thank you for the feed back and for reading my work, ill check out your work later today when I have more time.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.
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