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M

 I think thee unatenable
 O fowl will - o - wisp
 Through my mind floats
 Draws me through that bog
 To tregg the sludge-mudge of thought
 I follow thee , shade


 In life I watch thee from afar
 Near on the opposite shore I sit
 To neverous to call forth , to speak
 Over the roar of tempest fouled sea
 Though , could cross with half step
 From my sight you go
 From my thoughts , never


 In fair dream
 There I stand on shore I opposed sit
 Hand in hand
 Their I see we stand
 In my mind
 Done with full thinking only


 Loneliness of the moon
 Crowed with many friendly star
 I see you as unatenable as solar love
 Like the moon fain to kiss the sun
 In love gives ever languish chase
 Fail to kiss loves burning lips


 To the girl I can't get out of my head
 There I will keep thee
 For it be the only way
 I can have thee
 

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Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

nightscrawling’s Poems (36)

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