Mad Person

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  • Anger

    Mad Person

     Agrivation gets to me.
    As well as frustration.

    I can't get rid of the anger,
    It's overwhelming but comforting.

    My soul feels so intense.
    My chest is tender.
    And my heart is awake.

    Im alive inside.
    -All because I can feel emotion.

    Im a mad person.

    Stay the hell away!

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    dksamuri commented on Mad Person

    02-28-2010

    the part that stands out the most to me is the "its overwhelming but comforting", as i kno wat thats like. the anger is always there, under the surface, and it is a comfort because it is always there. i liked this one
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    Rhymer commented on Mad Person

    02-12-2010

    I feel the anger and have been on the brink of insanity from not being able to control the venom inside. 10 from me.
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    Ivelisse

    02/12/2010

    Thank you so much. Your comments are always welcome. I appreciate them, especially when there from a good poet.

    mustascheman commented on Mad Person

    02-12-2010

    Yes the feeling is there..but...it seems like you held back. Maybe there could have been more..something else you wanted to say? I don't know, maybe show a deeper expression of the emotion to really let it out! Never hold back. I like this poem, it is short but pointed. Well done!
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    Ivelisse

    02/12/2010

    Thank you. I appreciate it. I will achnowledge your comment and use it in future poems, No more holding back,. I promise. Thanks Again.

    JaleesaSoco commented on Mad Person

    02-12-2010

    The lines that wrap this poem and point up for me is, "I'm alive inside. All because I can feel emotion." Feelin' this one.
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    Ivelisse

    02/12/2010

    Thanks. I guess you actually have to have the emotion to get the reaction from others where they can actually feel it too.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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