Man's Transformation Of Rain

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Man's Transformation Of Rain

As I sit in this my home

Comfortable and warm

Outside my door in the sky

Brews a winter storm


The open heavens gazing down

Can't believe their view

In a world so full of hearts

The righteous are but few


Mother Earth and Father Time

Stare across the land

Questioning the whys and hows

Of the earthly man


Reflecting on the yester years

And what has now become

They nod their heads in disbelief

Of what we men have done


They shed a tear and let it fall

To rest upon a cloud

The tear seeps through in tiny drips

To fall upon earth's crowd


But as it enters through the gates

Where mortals' hearts are vain

The coldness here untouched by gods

Transforms their sorrowed rain


The bitter cold of frozen hearts

Transcends above the ground

Consumes the tears which they have sent

And only snow falls down


Their message lost to all mankind

We've messed it up again

And now we hide inside our homes

As winters' storms begin


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FLAWLES commented on Man's Transformation Of Rain

06-16-2009

This is great, and oh so true. Our eternal parents, would be proud of you. They have given us, this beautiful land, and probably wish, there were never Man.

bforibus commented on Man's Transformation Of Rain

06-16-2009

i love the interaction between the earth and the heavens. the way you let the melody carry the pain to a deeper display of love. great job on this one.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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