Many a Fool

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  • Sadness

    Many a Fool

    Life is just hard,
    I don't know in which hand has the good card,
    Both of my hands have been charred.
    I am lost,
    There's such a cost,
    For fallen memories that has become frost.
    Broken pieces,
    Makes large increases,
    Only wanting the releases.
    Little faith and forgotten trust,
    No one keeping lust,
    Finding bloodied heart shards under boards made of rust.
    Empty and down,
    Maybe I don't want to be found,
    Said the girl feeling like a clown.

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on Many a Fool

    12-27-2010

    that was wonderful dear. great rhythm and flow in this piece. and lets hope that you are found soon cause one with such talent should not stay hidden from those who will grow to love and respect such a wonderful poet........so sorry to take so long getting over here to read your work as I just got out of the hospital in time for christmas and am taking things very slow but being able to come home when I did was the best christmas present ever........keep up the good work darling as you talent is shinning......love asha

    Sx9 commented on Many a Fool

    12-18-2010

    yes we all can tell,my your words of pain and hardship,life is indeed hard and so we have to find a way to make it gentle,,love how you do that..

    dahlusion commented on Many a Fool

    12-18-2010

    "Maybe I don't want to be found, Said the girl feeling like a clown"—the perfect closing lines to this beautifully melancholic poem. Bravo!!!!!!!

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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