March 16, 2014, 9:42 PM

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A short poem. May edit it when I find time, or make a new one of the same concept.

March 16, 2014, 9:42 PM

Too many days let pass,
Before embraced as one,
Two poets at loss for words,
Their silence speaking for them.

Memories not soon forgotten,
The tale spun up between the two,
A dancing flame their only witness,
Snuffed out before an early rise.

A dream it seems in all reality,
That night so long ago,
One that plays in constant motion,
In memory until they meet again.

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Mandi commented on March 16, 2014, 9:42 PM

04-25-2014

incredible the way you pull the reader into the poem .it makes one feel a part of the poem whether they wish to or not that is a way for the reader to take ownership -romantic or not, it is up to the reader

Quanawana commented on March 16, 2014, 9:42 PM

03-20-2014

A dancing flame their only witness, Snuffed out before an early rise. Very vivid and beautiful words :)

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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