Mask

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    Mask

    I'm so tired,
    Your so insane,
    Two different souls,
    Two different bodies.

    Our souls are intertwined,
    I can feel your pain,
    and you can feel mine.

    I can see the sadness
    and pain you hide
    beaneath that hard cold mask.

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    HopeOhlarik commented on Mask

    11-23-2009

    very good, i can relate to the feelin of this poem easliy. good job!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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