Maui & Me!

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Maui & Me!

Oh Maui....You waved.
Your shores declare my vows.
Kapalua, I will remember.
Your mountain peaks, Haleakala!

Pa'ia, you hippi town.
And mama save me some fish!
Waiokuna Falls, never stop.
Your bamboo dreams of being Rainbow eucalyptus.

Are the paintings still to much?
Is it still cold on the mountain?
Have you kept your black sands?
How are the turtles?

My heart aches at the song,
''Over the rainbow''.
Do a luau for me,
and know that I am waving back!

                                          By Keith L. Smith

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knight4696 commented on Maui & Me!

03-14-2010

KLS - Nice tribute to one of Hawai's most beautiful islands! I have never been there myself - but have always longed to. Maybe one day ... Great job! :) Ken

KLS

03/15/2010

Ken! You should go check it out. It is beautiful!!!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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